From 8da379ef8f1a4ab5c0bfb141c767b695f354850c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ArbestRiAgain <132712354+ArbestRiAgain@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 28 Sep 2023 19:50:27 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Big README update

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 # shadPS4
 
-An early PS4 emulator for Windows and Linux
+An early PS4 emulator for Windows and Linux written in C++
 
 
 [Check us on twitter](https://twitter.com/shadps4 "Check us on twitter")
 
 # Status
 
-Currently it can only load PS4 ELF files.
+Currently, it can only load PS4 ELF files.
 
-Progress is focus on videoout_basic.elf from sdk demos , currently it can load and run a few HLE calls. Others probably won't run since they might not be able to relocate all neccesary functions
+Progress is focused on videoout_basic.elf from SDK demos, currently, it can load with fully working graphics. Others probably won't run since they might not be able to relocate all necessary functions
 
 ![](https://geps.dev/progress/60) Elf Loader
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Progress is focus on videoout_basic.elf from sdk demos , currently it can load a
 
 # Why?
 
-The project started as a fun project. Due to short amount of free time probably it will take a while since it will be able to run something decent but I am trying to do regular small commits.
+The project started as a fun project. Due to short free time, it will probably take a while since it will be able to run something decent, but I am trying to do regular small commits.
 
 # Build
 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Check building instructions in [linux build](https://github.com/georgemoralis/sh
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 |Windows build|[![Windows](https://github.com/georgemoralis/shadPS4/actions/workflows/windows.yml/badge.svg)](https://github.com/georgemoralis/shadPS4/actions/workflows/windows.yml)
 
-To discuss this emulator please join our Discord server: [![Discord](https://img.shields.io/discord/1080089157554155590)](https://discord.gg/MyZRaBngxA)
+To discuss the development of this emulator, please join our Discord server: [![Discord](https://img.shields.io/discord/1080089157554155590)](https://discord.gg/MyZRaBngxA)
 
 # Who are you?
 
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ Old emulator fans and devs can recognize me as "shadow". I was the founder and c
 
 # Contribution
 
-I currently accept any kind of contribution, here is a list of some items that may be useful:
+I currently accept any contribution, here is a list of some items that may be useful:
 
-* PKG extractor (there was an initial work on this, just search project history commits).
+* PKG extractor (there was initial work on this, search project history commits).
 * Initial GUI with imgui, SDL3 and Vulkan.
 * to be filled...
 
@@ -65,4 +65,4 @@ Wiki has some documentation for PS4 PKG format
 
 # Sister Projects
 - [Panda3DS](https://github.com/wheremyfoodat/Panda3DS): An multiplatform 3DS emulator from our co-author wheremyfoodat
-- [hydra](https://github.com/hydra-emu/hydra): An multisystem , multiplatfrom emulator (chip-8,GB,NES,N64) from paris
+- [hydra](https://github.com/hydra-emu/hydra): An multisystem , multiplatform emulator (chip-8,GB,NES,N64) from Paris